Persuasive Writing

Doctors should come to YOU

Why should we extend our recovery time of a cold, trying to shorten it? We have to get out of bed, sit and wait in the slow process of the waiting room to finally see the doctor. All in the time of leaving and picking up more germs. If the doctors came to you, for a checkup, at your own home then you can chose how clean the magazines are. Not that you would be reading them, waiting.You'll never pick up anybody elses germs. You would get one on one uninterrupted time with them, to try and get better. Without even having to leave your own bed. I am going to explain to you, why Doctors should come to you, for your benefit. 

Waiting rooms are unhygienic. The "Waiting Room" is a germ airport. Flying in different directions, being picked up and left in so many different locations! You're reading through a magazine you found in the box next to you, in the doctor's waiting room. The person across from you sneezes, grabs a tissue and wipes the snot she just spat out onto the magazine she is reading. Back you go to your one to see that at the top corner the text reads:

DATE: 20/3/2010.

That gives over 5 years of people to do the same thing the lady across from you has just done! If I was you, I would slam that magazine shut and run down to your local dairy to read this piece of writing. Don't wait that long process of the waiting room full of germs that you can pick up, and leave so others catch them. The reason you have come here is to recover from your cold, not to pick up another one! 

Doctors coming to you avoids patients having to leave the warmth of their home. Having to get out of bed is a struggle, let alone when you have a cold! Doctors should come to you because otherwise you're just going to get worse and never get better. You lean over to your bedside table, the cough syrup is eliminated from its bottle! This really helpful stuff that you have taken now means that you have to get out of bed, make a trip to the airport of germs the "Waiting Room" to get a prescription for some new stuff and get told to stay in bed. Well what have you just done? Exactly, get out of bed. 

Doctors can have vehicles set up and equipped with the right things to deal with most basic situations. It would be just the same as an ambulance although from the DP not ED. They would have everything stored in there. They turn up to your house, knock on the door, you would answer them and get them to come in. Of course, yes you have to get out of bed, but it's not like you have to go outside, the heater would be on and you would be nice and warm. They would ask you questions, grab the things that you need and come back to talk to you. It's so much easier, it cuts out so many steps of picking up more germs and it's much faster. This needs to happen! 

Waiting rooms are unhygienic. Doctors coming to you avoids patients having to leave the warmth of their home. Doctors can have vehicles set up and equipped with the right things to deal with most basic situations. So why should we extend our recovery time of a cold, trying to shorten it? Doctors should definitely come to you.